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Cambridge 14 Writing Task 2 Test 3 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)

Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.

The Prompt

Music - A Universal Language that Unites People Across Cultures and Ages

Music is played in every known culture, past and present, varying widely between times and places. Some people think that music brings people of different cultures and ages together, while others feel that it keeps them apart.

What is your view?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Band 9

251 words

Concedes a genuine counterpoint about subcultures before explaining why it does not undermine the overall argument, rather than ignoring the opposing view.

Music is often described as a universal language, yet whether it genuinely brings people from different cultures and ages together, or instead highlights and reinforces the differences between them, is a more complicated question than it first appears, and I believe the evidence generally supports the more optimistic view.

There is compelling evidence that music unites people across cultural and generational divides. International music festivals routinely attract audiences from dozens of countries who bond over shared enthusiasm despite speaking no common language, and genres like jazz and hip-hop have spread across cultures precisely because rhythm and melody can be appreciated without translation. Within families, too, music can bridge generational gaps, as when parents and children discover shared enthusiasm for an artist despite decades of age difference.

That said, I acknowledge music can also divide people, particularly when tied closely to specific subcultures or identities; certain music scenes can feel exclusionary to outsiders, and generational taste gaps genuinely exist, with older and younger listeners sometimes struggling to find common ground. However, I would argue these divisions are more often about specific genres or scenes than about music as a whole, which remains broadly accessible across boundaries in a way that most other art forms are not.

In conclusion, while music can occasionally reinforce cultural or generational boundaries at the level of specific genres, I believe its overall effect is to bring people together, since rhythm and melody communicate emotion in ways that transcend language and background far more often than they divide.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Directly addresses the 'what is your view' question with a clear, well-justified position, and specific examples (international festivals, jazz's spread, family listening habits) anchor the argument throughout.

Coherence & Cohesion: Each paragraph carries a distinct function, and cohesive devices ("that said", "in conclusion") link them naturally throughout.

Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("transcend", "exclusionary", "broadly accessible") used with natural collocation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including relative clauses and non-finite clauses, used with full accuracy.

Band 8

252 words

A clear, well-supported position, just slightly less tightly argued than a band 9 answer.

Music is sometimes called a universal language, and there is an ongoing debate about whether it brings people from different cultures and ages together, or whether it actually keeps them apart. In my opinion, music generally has a uniting effect.

There is strong evidence that music brings people together across cultures. International music festivals attract people from many different countries who enjoy the same music even without speaking the same language, and genres like jazz have become popular in many parts of the world because rhythm and melody do not need to be translated. Music can also bring generations together within families, for example when parents and children both enjoy the same songs or artists.

However, I accept that music can sometimes divide people too, especially when certain music styles are closely linked to specific groups or subcultures that can feel unwelcoming to outsiders. There can also be real differences in taste between older and younger generations. Even so, I believe these examples of division are the exception rather than the rule, since the vast majority of everyday listening experiences, from a shared car ride to a wedding reception, tend to bring people of different backgrounds and ages together rather than pushing them apart. This is true almost everywhere in the world.

In conclusion, although music can occasionally create divisions between specific groups, I believe its overall effect is to bring people of different cultures and ages closer together, since it can communicate emotion in ways that do not depend on language.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Addresses the question with a clear position and relevant examples, though the reasoning is slightly less integrated than the band 9 answer's.

Coherence & Cohesion: Clear four-paragraph structure with accurate cohesive devices throughout.

Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, though "strong evidence" is more general than the higher-band answer's more precise phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.

Band 7

254 words

A clear, reasoned answer that would be stronger with one more specific example to anchor its argument.

Some people think music brings people from different cultures and ages together, while others think music keeps people apart. I think music mostly brings people together.

One reason I think this is that music festivals often attract people from many different countries, and they can all enjoy the same music even if they do not speak the same language. Also, some types of music, like pop or jazz, are popular all around the world, which shows that music can cross cultural boundaries easily.

I also think music can bring different generations together, because sometimes parents and children like the same songs or the same singers, even though they grew up in very different times.

However, I understand that music can also divide people sometimes, for example if a certain type of music is only popular with a specific group of people, other people might feel left out or might not understand why it is popular. Even so, I think these cases are less common than the times when music brings people together, such as at concerts, weddings, or family gatherings, where people of very different ages and backgrounds can all enjoy the same song at the same time. Weddings in particular often bring together grandparents, parents, and children who all end up dancing to the same music despite their very different tastes the rest of the year.

In conclusion, I believe music generally brings people together more than it divides them, because it can be enjoyed and understood by people from very different backgrounds.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Addresses the question with a clear position and relevant reasoning on both sides, but the examples given stay fairly general compared with the higher-band answers.

Coherence & Cohesion: Organised logically with one clear idea per paragraph; cohesive devices ("However", "In conclusion") are accurate but predictable.

Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "people" and "together" throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.

Band 6.5

253 words

The reasoning is clear and logically organised, but agreement errors on nearly every key task word noticeably lower the score.

Some people think music bring people from different culture and age together, while other people think music keep people apart. I think music mostly bring people together.

One reason I think this is that music festival often attract people from many different country, and they can all enjoy the same music even if they do not speak the same language. Also, some type of music, like pop or jazz, is popular all around the world, which show that music can cross cultural boundary easily.

I also think music can bring different generation together, because sometimes parent and child like the same song or the same singer, even though they grew up in very different time.

However, I understand that music can also divide people sometimes, for example if certain type of music is only popular with specific group of people, other people might feel left out or might not understand why it is popular. Even so, I think these case are less common than the time when music bring people together, such as at concert, wedding, or family gathering, where people of very different age and background can all enjoy the same song at the same time. Wedding in particular often bring together grandparent, parent, and children who all end up dancing to the same music despite their very different taste the rest of the year.

In conclusion, I believe music generally bring people together more than it divide them, because it can be enjoy and understand by people from very different background.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Addresses the question with a clear position, matching the content of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout reduce clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same one-idea-per-paragraph structure as the higher-band answers.

Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals on key task words ("culture", "generation", "country") used throughout instead of their plural forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("music bring people", "music festival often attract", "some type of music... is popular") appear on nearly every sentence.

Band 4-5 - What to Avoid

44 words

States a position but never really explores why music unites or divides people, and stays well under the required length.

I think music bring people together, this is my opinion.

When people listen same music they feel happy together, even different country.

But sometimes music also make people different, some like one type, some like other type, this is my opinion about this topic.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: States a position but gives almost no development, each idea gets a single unsupported sentence, so the question of what unites or divides people through music is not really explored. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.

Coherence & Cohesion: Paragraphs list ideas without connecting them into a developing argument.

Lexical Resource: Extremely basic and repetitive vocabulary ("happy", "together", "different") with no attempt at more varied language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors, including missing articles and subject-verb agreement ("music bring people together").

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