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Cambridge 13 Writing Task 2 Test 2 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)
Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.
The Prompt
Too Many Choices
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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272 wordsNames a specific psychological phenomenon and a concrete context (online retail) rather than arguing about choice in the abstract.
Modern life certainly presents more options than ever before, from the hundreds of television channels available at home to the overwhelming range of products lining supermarket shelves, and I largely agree that this abundance of choice, while appearing beneficial, often does more harm than good.
There is a strong argument that having more choices increases individual freedom and allows people to find products, careers, or lifestyles that genuinely suit their needs, rather than accepting whatever limited options were previously available. In theory, this should make people happier and more satisfied with their decisions.
In practice, however, psychological research on what is often called 'choice overload' suggests the opposite frequently occurs. When faced with dozens of nearly identical options, such as thirty types of shampoo or a hundred streaming shows to choose from, many people experience decision fatigue, spend excessive time deliberating over trivial matters, and often end up feeling less satisfied with their eventual choice than if they had faced only a handful of options from the start. This phenomenon is particularly visible in online retail, where endless scrolling through similar products has become a genuine source of everyday stress for many consumers. Retailers themselves have started to recognise this problem, and some now deliberately limit the number of options they display, precisely because offering fewer, carefully curated choices can increase both customer satisfaction and sales.
In conclusion, while I accept that more choice can genuinely benefit consumers in some circumstances, I largely agree that modern life now offers so many options in areas like shopping and entertainment that the abundance itself has become a source of unnecessary anxiety and wasted time.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Directly addresses 'to what extent' with a clear, well-justified position, and the specific reference to 'choice overload' research and online retail gives the argument genuine substance.
Coherence & Cohesion: Each paragraph carries a distinct function, and cohesive devices ("in practice, however", "in conclusion") connect ideas naturally throughout.
Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("decision fatigue", "deliberating", "abundance") used with natural collocation.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including relative clauses and non-finite clauses, used with full accuracy.
Band 8
265 wordsWell argued and clearly structured, just slightly more general in its supporting evidence than a band 9 answer.
In today's world, we are certainly presented with far more choices than people had in the past, whether in shopping, entertainment, or careers, and I agree to a large extent that this can be a problem rather than purely a benefit.
It is true that having more choices can be positive, since it allows people to find exactly what suits their needs instead of accepting limited options. This can lead to greater satisfaction in areas like choosing a career or a place to live.
However, I believe too many choices can also cause real problems. When people face dozens of very similar options, such as many types of shampoo in a supermarket or hundreds of shows on a streaming service, it can become difficult and stressful to decide, and people often spend a lot of time on decisions that should be simple. Research has shown that this can even make people feel less satisfied with what they eventually choose, compared to when they had fewer options. Retailers themselves have started to notice this problem, and some now deliberately reduce the number of products they offer, since research suggests that a smaller, more carefully chosen range can actually increase both customer satisfaction and overall sales figures. This shows that even businesses are beginning to question the assumption that more choice is always better for the people buying their products.
In conclusion, although having more choices can sometimes be beneficial, I agree that in areas like shopping and entertainment, we often now have too many options, which can create unnecessary stress rather than making our lives easier.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Addresses 'to what extent' with a clear opinion and relevant reasoning, though it references research and examples more generally than the band 9 answer's specific terminology.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clear structure with an accurate "However" pivot and a well-signposted conclusion.
Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, though "can become difficult and stressful" is more general than the higher-band answer's more precise phrasing.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.
Band 7
264 wordsA clear, reasoned answer that stays fairly simple compared with the more developed reasoning of a band 9 answer.
Nowadays, people have many more choices than in the past, for example when shopping or choosing entertainment, and I agree with this opinion to some extent.
One reason more choice can be good is that people can find products or services that really match what they want, instead of only having a few limited options like before. This can make people feel more satisfied with their decisions.
However, I think having too many choices can also be a problem. For example, when someone goes to a supermarket and sees many similar products, like many types of shampoo, it can take a long time to decide which one to buy. This can make shopping more stressful instead of easier, and sometimes people are not even happy with the choice they finally make. Another example is choosing what to watch on a streaming service, where there are often hundreds of shows and films available, and people can spend a long time just scrolling through the options instead of actually watching something. I think this happens because when there are too many similar things to choose from, it becomes harder to feel confident that you have picked the best one, so people end up feeling less satisfied even though they technically had more choice than before.
In my opinion, while some choice is good, having too many options in things like shopping and entertainment can cause more stress than benefit for most people.
In conclusion, I agree that we now have too many choices in modern life, and this can sometimes make decisions harder rather than easier.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Addresses 'to what extent' with a clear position and a relevant example (choosing shampoo), but the reasoning stays fairly simple compared with the higher-band answers.
Coherence & Cohesion: Organised logically with one idea per paragraph; cohesive devices ("However", "In conclusion") are accurate but predictable.
Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "choice" and "stressful" throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.
Band 6.5
258 wordsThe reasoning is clear and logically organised, but agreement errors on nearly every key task word noticeably lower the score.
Nowadays, people have many more choice than in the past, for example when shopping or choosing entertainment, and I agree with this opinion to some extent.
One reason more choice can be good is that people can find product or service that really match what they want, instead of only having few limited option like before. This can make people feel more satisfied with their decision.
However, I think having too many choice can also be problem. For example, when someone go to supermarket and see many similar product, like many type of shampoo, it can take long time to decide which one to buy. This can make shopping more stressful instead of easier, and sometimes people is not even happy with the choice they finally make. Another example is choosing what to watch on streaming service, where there is often hundreds of show and film available, and people can spend long time just scrolling through the option instead of actually watching something. I think this happen because when there is too many similar thing to choose from, it become harder to feel confident that you have pick the best one, so people end up feeling less satisfied even though they technically had more choice than before.
In my opinion, while some choice is good, having too many option in thing like shopping and entertainment can cause more stress than benefit for most people.
In conclusion, I agree that we now have too many choice in modern life, and this can sometimes make decision harder rather than easier.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Addresses 'to what extent' with a clear position, matching the content of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout reduce clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same one-idea-per-paragraph structure as the higher-band answers.
Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals on key task words ("choice", "product", "option") used throughout instead of their plural forms.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("someone go to supermarket", "people is not even happy", "we now have too many choice") appear on nearly every sentence.
Band 4-5 - What to Avoid
43 wordsStates a position but never explains to what extent, and stays well under the required length.
I think today we have too many choice, this is true.
In shop there is many product, sometime this is confuse for people.
I agree we have too many choice, this make life more hard sometimes, this is my opinion about this topic.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: States agreement but gives almost no development, each idea gets a single unsupported sentence, so the instruction to explain 'to what extent' is not really fulfilled. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.
Coherence & Cohesion: Paragraphs list ideas without connecting them into a developing argument.
Lexical Resource: Extremely basic and repetitive vocabulary ("choice", "confuse", "hard") with no attempt at more varied language.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors, including missing plurals ("too many choice") and awkward phrasing ("this make life more hard").
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