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Cambridge 13 Writing Task 2 Test 1 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)

Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.

The Prompt

Speaking a Foreign Language Abroad

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Band 9

279 words

Distinguishes practical from social problems and treats each with a different, well-justified degree of agreement, rather than agreeing or disagreeing wholesale.

Moving to a country where daily life must be conducted in an unfamiliar language undoubtedly creates real difficulties, and while I agree that it produces genuine practical problems, I believe the social problems it generates are usually less severe than the statement suggests, provided the newcomer makes a genuine effort to integrate.

The practical challenges are the most immediate and hardest to dispute. Simple daily tasks, such as opening a bank account, understanding a rental contract, or explaining symptoms to a doctor, become far more stressful when conducted in a second language, and misunderstandings in these situations can have serious consequences, ranging from financial loss to inadequate medical treatment. In my own experience assisting newly arrived colleagues, even highly educated professionals often struggle with the specialised, bureaucratic language that native speakers take for granted.

Social problems, however, tend to be less severe and more temporary than the statement implies. While initial isolation and awkwardness are common in the first months, most people gradually build friendships and confidence as their language skills improve, particularly if they actively join local clubs, classes, or workplaces rather than remaining within an expatriate bubble. Cities with large, established immigrant populations, such as London or Toronto, also tend to offer support networks and community groups that ease this transition considerably, reducing what might otherwise be serious social difficulty to something far more manageable.

In conclusion, while I agree that language barriers create real and sometimes serious practical problems, I believe the social difficulties described in the statement are generally surmountable with time, effort, and a genuine willingness to engage with the local community, so I would only partially agree with the statement as a whole.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Directly addresses 'to what extent' with a clear, nuanced partial-agreement position, and draws a specific, well-reasoned distinction between practical and social problems rather than treating the statement as a single claim.

Coherence & Cohesion: Each paragraph builds logically on the last, and cohesive devices ("however", "in conclusion") signal the argument's structure precisely throughout.

Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("surmountable", "expatriate bubble", "bureaucratic language") used with natural collocation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including non-finite clauses and relative clauses, used with full accuracy.

Band 8

271 words

A clear, well-supported partial agreement, just slightly less tightly argued than a band 9 answer.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language every day can certainly create both practical and social problems, and I agree with this statement to a large extent, although I think the two types of problems are not equally serious.

The practical problems are, in my opinion, the more serious of the two. Everyday tasks such as dealing with banks, signing contracts, or visiting a doctor become much more difficult when they must be handled in an unfamiliar language, and mistakes in these situations can lead to real financial or even medical consequences. I have seen this happen to colleagues who moved abroad for work and initially struggled with official paperwork that they would have understood easily in their own language.

Social problems can also occur, especially at the beginning, when it is hard to make friends or feel part of a community because of the language barrier. However, I believe these problems tend to improve over time, as people's language skills develop and they become more confident joining local activities or workplaces. Cities with large immigrant communities, such as London, often make this process easier by offering support groups and classes for newcomers. Over time, most people find that their confidence grows steadily, and the sense of isolation that can make the first few months abroad difficult tends to fade as everyday interactions become more natural.

In conclusion, I agree that living abroad in a foreign language can cause both practical and social problems, but I believe the practical problems are usually more serious, while the social problems tend to ease naturally with time and effort.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Addresses 'to what extent' with a clear position and a reasonable distinction between practical and social problems, though the reasoning is slightly less integrated than the band 9 answer's.

Coherence & Cohesion: Clear four-paragraph structure with accurate cohesive devices throughout.

Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, though phrases like "a large extent" are more general than the higher-band answer's more precise language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.

Band 7

271 words

A clear, reasoned answer that would be stronger with one concrete example to anchor its argument.

Living in a country where people have to speak a foreign language can cause problems in both daily life and in making friends, and I agree with this statement to some extent.

One reason I agree is that practical problems can be very serious. For example, if someone does not understand the language well, they might have trouble opening a bank account, signing important documents, or talking to a doctor about their health. These are all situations where making a mistake because of the language can cause real problems for a person.

I also think there can be social problems, especially when someone first arrives in a new country. It can be hard to make friends or feel comfortable talking to people if you are not confident in the language. However, I believe this problem usually gets better over time, because most people slowly improve their language skills and start to feel more relaxed talking to others. This kind of progress often happens naturally within the first year, especially for people who make an effort to join local groups, take language classes, or simply spend regular time speaking with native speakers rather than only with people from their own country.

In my opinion, the practical problems mentioned in the statement are more serious than the social problems, because mistakes with paperwork or health issues can have bigger consequences than feeling shy or lonely for a while.

In conclusion, I agree that living in a country where you must speak a foreign language can cause both practical and social problems, although I think the practical ones are usually more serious and long-lasting.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Addresses 'to what extent' with a clear position, but no specific real-world example (a city, a country, a personal case) is used to support the reasoning, unlike the higher-band answers.

Coherence & Cohesion: Organised logically with one clear idea per paragraph; cohesive devices ("However", "In conclusion") are accurate but predictable.

Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "problems" and "language" throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.

Band 6.5

264 words

The reasoning is sound and clearly organised, but agreement errors on nearly every key task word noticeably lower the score.

Living in a country where people have to speak foreign language can cause problem in both daily life and in making friend, and I agree with this statement to some extent.

One reason I agree is that practical problem can be very serious. For example, if someone do not understand the language well, they might have trouble opening bank account, signing important document, or talking to doctor about their health. These is all situation where making mistake because of the language can cause real problem for a person.

I also think there can be social problem, especially when someone first arrive in new country. It can be hard to make friend or feel comfortable talking to people if you are not confident in the language. However, I believe this problem usually get better over time, because most people slowly improve their language skill and start to feel more relax talking to others. This kind of progress often happen naturally within the first year, especially for people who make effort to join local group, take language class, or simply spend regular time speaking with native speaker rather than only with people from their own country.

In my opinion, the practical problem mention in the statement is more serious than the social problem, because mistake with paperwork or health issue can have bigger consequence than feeling shy or lonely for a while.

In conclusion, I agree that living in a country where you must speak foreign language can cause both practical and social problem, although I think the practical one is usually more serious and long-lasting.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Addresses 'to what extent' with a clear position, matching the content of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout reduce clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same one-idea-per-paragraph structure as the higher-band answers.

Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals on key task words ("problem", "document", "friend") used throughout instead of their plural forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("someone do not understand", "someone first arrive", "this problem usually get better", "the practical problem... is more serious") appear on nearly every sentence.

Band 4-5 - What to Avoid

55 words

States a position but never explains to what extent, and stays well under the required length.

I think language problem is very serious when you live in another country.

If you cannot speak language good, you cannot make friend easy and you feel alone. Also you have problem in shop or hospital.

I agree with this because I know people who have this problem, this is my opinion about this topic.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: States agreement but gives almost no development, each idea gets a single unsupported sentence, so the instruction to explain 'to what extent' is not really fulfilled. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.

Coherence & Cohesion: Paragraphs list ideas without connecting them into a developing argument.

Lexical Resource: Extremely basic and repetitive vocabulary ("problem", "good", "alone") with no attempt at more varied language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors, including missing plurals and subject-verb agreement ("cannot speak language good", "cannot make friend easy").

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