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Cambridge 11 Writing Task 2 Test 2 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)

Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.

The Prompt

Recycling and Legal Requirements

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Band 9

256 words

Backs its central claim with a specific, verifiable policy example rather than arguing only in general terms.

It is true that household recycling rates remain disappointingly low in many countries, but I would argue that legislation, while a useful tool, should be one part of a broader strategy rather than the sole solution to this problem.

There is a reasonable case for legal requirements. Voluntary approaches rely on individual motivation, which varies enormously and often falls away once the initial enthusiasm for an environmental campaign fades. South Korea's introduction of mandatory food waste recycling, backed by fines for non-compliance, produced a dramatic and lasting increase in recycling rates almost overnight, a result that voluntary campaigns alone had failed to achieve over the preceding decade.

However, laws alone address behaviour without necessarily addressing the practical barriers that discourage recycling in the first place. If a city provides confusing collection schedules, insufficient recycling bins, or no accessible drop-off points for materials like electronics, then even residents who face legal penalties may struggle to comply, breeding resentment rather than genuine behavioural change. Effective recycling systems, such as those in parts of Scandinavia, combine legal requirements with genuinely convenient infrastructure and clear public education, so that compliance becomes the easiest option rather than a burden.

In conclusion, while legal requirements can meaningfully accelerate recycling rates, as South Korea demonstrates, they work best when paired with convenient infrastructure and public education, rather than being relied upon as a standalone solution. Countries that invest in only one of these elements, whether laws or infrastructure, on its own consistently see weaker results than those that combine both from the outset.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Fully addresses the extent to which laws are needed with a clear, nuanced position, and the South Korea example provides genuine, specific evidence rather than a generic assertion.

Coherence & Cohesion: Each paragraph carries a distinct function, and cohesive devices ("however", "in conclusion") connect ideas naturally throughout.

Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("breeding resentment", "standalone solution", "genuinely convenient infrastructure") used with natural collocation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including conditionals and relative clauses, used with full accuracy.

Band 8

256 words

Well argued with a specific example, just slightly less tightly reasoned than a band 9 answer.

I believe that laws can help increase recycling rates, but I do not think they are the only solution, and other measures are also needed for laws to actually work.

There are good reasons to support legal requirements for recycling. When recycling is only voluntary, many people simply do not bother, either because they forget or because they do not see any immediate benefit to themselves. Making recycling a legal requirement, with penalties for those who do not follow the rules, gives people a stronger reason to change their habits. South Korea is a good example of this, since introducing mandatory food waste recycling led to a large increase in recycling rates within a short period of time.

However, laws alone are not always enough. If people do not have easy access to recycling bins, or if the rules about what can be recycled are confusing, then even a legal requirement may not lead to real change, and people might simply ignore the law or break it without being caught. This is why successful recycling systems, such as those in some Scandinavian countries, usually combine clear laws with convenient facilities and public education about how and why to recycle.

In conclusion, I think laws are helpful and can speed up progress on recycling, but they need to be combined with good infrastructure and education in order to be truly effective. Without both elements working together, even a well-designed law risks being ignored or poorly enforced in practice, especially in larger cities where enforcement is already difficult.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Fully addresses the question with a clear, well-supported position and a specific example (South Korea), though the reasoning is slightly less tightly argued than the band 9 answer's.

Coherence & Cohesion: Clear structure with an accurate "However" pivot and a well-signposted conclusion.

Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, though "real change" is a little more general than the more precise phrasing of a higher-band answer.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.

Band 7

264 words

A clear, well-reasoned answer that would be stronger with one concrete example to anchor its argument.

I think laws can help people recycle more, but I do not think laws alone are enough to solve the whole problem, because other things need to change too.

One reason laws can help is that many people do not recycle simply because it is not required, and if there is no punishment for not recycling, some people will not bother to do it. If governments make recycling a legal requirement, with fines for people who do not follow the rules, this could push more people to start recycling, because they do not want to pay a fine. This kind of financial pressure can be a strong motivator, even for people who were not originally interested in recycling at all.

However, I believe laws are not the only answer. Sometimes people do not recycle because it is inconvenient, for example if there are not enough recycling bins near their home, or if they are not sure which items can be recycled and which cannot. In these cases, simply making a law will not really solve the problem, because people may still find it difficult to follow the rules correctly, even if they want to. Governments therefore need to think carefully about how easy or difficult a new law will actually be for ordinary people to follow.

In conclusion, I think laws can be a useful tool to increase recycling, but governments also need to provide good facilities and clear information so that people can actually follow the law easily. Otherwise, the law risks becoming something people ignore rather than something that changes their behaviour.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Addresses the question with a clear position and relevant reasoning on both sides, but no specific real-world example is used to support either point, unlike in the higher-band answers.

Coherence & Cohesion: Organised logically with one clear idea per paragraph; cohesive devices ("However", "In conclusion") are accurate but predictable.

Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "recycle"/"recycling" throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.

Band 6.5

262 words

The argument is sound and balanced, but agreement and article errors appear on almost every line.

I think law can help people recycle more, but I don't think law alone is enough to solve whole problem, because other thing need to change too. This is very important issue for many country today because waste keep increasing every year.

One reason law can help is that many people not recycle simply because it is not require, and if there is no punishment for not recycle, some people will not bother to do it. If government make recycling a legal requirement, with fine for people who not follow rule, this could push more people to start recycle, because they don't want to pay fine. This kind of financial pressure can be strong motivator, even for people who was not originally interested in recycling at all.

However, I believe law is not only answer. Sometime people not recycle because it is inconvenient, for example if there is not enough recycling bin near their home, or if they are not sure which item can be recycle and which cannot. In this case, simply making a law will not really solve problem, because people may still find it difficult to follow rule correctly, even if they want to. Government therefore need to think carefully about how easy or difficult new law will actually be for ordinary people to follow.

In conclusion, I think law can be useful tool to increase recycling, but government also need to provide good facility and clear information so people can actually follow law easily. Otherwise, law risk becoming something people ignore rather than something that change their behaviour.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Addresses the question with a clear position, matching the content and structure of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout make it noticeably harder to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same clear structure as the higher-band answers, one idea per paragraph.

Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals and articles on key task words ("law", "rule", "bin") used throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement and article errors ("law can help", "people not recycle", "is not require", "government make", "government also need") appear in nearly every sentence.

Band 4-5 - What to Avoid

57 words

States an opinion but never develops a single point, and stays well under the required length.

I think law is good for recycling. If no law, people forget to recycle.

But sometime bin is not near house, so people cannot recycle easy even they want.

Government must make more bin and also make law, this can help I think.

In conclusion law is helpful for recycling, this is my opinion about this topic.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: A position is stated but with almost no development, each sentence introduces a new idea without ever explaining or supporting it. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.

Coherence & Cohesion: Paragraphs are short, disconnected statements with minimal linking beyond "But" and "So".

Lexical Resource: Vocabulary is extremely basic and repetitive ("law", "good", "help" used with little variation).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors throughout ("If no law, people forget", "bin is not near house", "people cannot recycle easy").

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