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Cambridge 17 Writing Task 2 Test 1 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)

Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.

The Prompt

Taking Risks in Life

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.

Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Band 9

275 words

Draws a genuine distinction between calculated and reckless risk rather than treating all risk-taking as equivalent.

Taking risks, whether in one's career or personal life, inevitably brings both the possibility of failure and the possibility of considerable reward, and I believe that when risks are taken thoughtfully rather than recklessly, their advantages clearly outweigh their disadvantages.

In professional life, calculated risks often lead to significant advancement that would be impossible through caution alone. Someone who leaves a stable, well-paid job to start their own business, for example, faces genuine financial uncertainty, yet many of today's most successful entrepreneurs only achieved their success because they were willing to risk failure in pursuit of an idea they believed in. Even when such ventures fail, the skills and resilience gained often prove valuable in future employment, meaning the risk rarely results in total loss.

In personal life, similar reasoning applies. Moving to a new country for work or study, for instance, involves real risks, from cultural isolation to financial hardship, but it also opens access to opportunities, relationships, and experiences that would otherwise remain permanently out of reach. Without a willingness to accept some uncertainty, most people would never leave their comfort zone at all, and personal growth would stagnate considerably.

That said, not all risks are worth taking. Reckless risks taken without adequate research or preparation, such as investing one's entire savings in a venture without understanding it properly, can cause genuine and lasting harm rather than growth. The distinction between a calculated risk and a reckless gamble is therefore crucial to this discussion.

In conclusion, I believe the advantages of taking well-considered risks, in both professional and personal life, generally outweigh the disadvantages, provided the risks taken are calculated rather than reckless.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Fully addresses both professional and personal risk-taking with well-developed examples and a clear, nuanced position distinguishing calculated risk from recklessness.

Coherence & Cohesion: Ideas progress logically from professional to personal examples to a limiting case, with cohesive devices ("that said", "therefore") managing each shift smoothly.

Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("stagnate", "resilience", "reckless gamble") used with natural collocation throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including concession clauses, used with full accuracy.

Band 8

261 words

Clearly argued with relevant examples, just slightly more general in its supporting detail than a band 9 answer.

Taking risks in both professional and personal life can lead to failure, but it can also lead to significant rewards, and I believe the advantages generally outweigh the disadvantages when risks are taken sensibly.

In professional life, taking a risk can lead to real career advancement. For example, someone who leaves a secure job to start their own business faces financial uncertainty, but many successful entrepreneurs only achieved their success because they were willing to take this kind of risk. Even if the business fails, the person usually gains useful skills and experience that help them in future jobs.

In personal life, taking risks can also be beneficial. Moving to a new country, for example, involves real risks such as cultural isolation or financial difficulty, but it also creates opportunities that would not exist otherwise. Without taking some risks, people would rarely leave their comfort zone or grow as individuals.

However, not every risk is worth taking. Reckless risks, such as investing all of one's savings without proper research, can cause serious harm rather than benefit. This is why the difference between a calculated risk and a reckless one matters so much.

In conclusion, I believe that taking well-considered risks in both professional and personal life usually brings more advantages than disadvantages, as long as the risks are carefully thought through rather than reckless. This is particularly true in a rapidly changing job market, where those who are willing to adapt, retrain, or pursue unconventional paths often end up better positioned than those who remain overly cautious throughout their entire career.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Fully addresses both professional and personal risk-taking with relevant examples, though the reasoning is slightly more general than the band 9 answer's.

Coherence & Cohesion: Clear five-paragraph structure with accurate cohesive devices throughout.

Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, though "grow as individuals" is more general than the higher-band answer's more precise phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.

Band 7

264 words

A clear, well-reasoned position that would be stronger with the business example developed further.

Taking risks in life, both at work and in personal situations, can be difficult, but I believe the advantages usually outweigh the disadvantages.

In professional life, taking a risk can help someone succeed. For example, a person who leaves a safe job to start a business takes a big risk, but if it works, they can be very successful. Even if the business does not succeed, they learn useful skills for the future.

In personal life, taking risks can also be good. For example, moving to another country is risky because it is difficult and unfamiliar, but it can also bring new opportunities that a person would not have otherwise.

However, some risks are not worth taking. If someone takes a big risk without thinking carefully, such as spending all their money on something they do not understand, this can cause serious problems.

In conclusion, I think taking risks in professional and personal life usually has more advantages than disadvantages, but only if the risk is carefully considered first. Many successful people, in business and in other areas of life, often say that their biggest achievements came from moments when they were willing to try something uncertain rather than staying completely safe. Of course, not every risk works out, and some people do lose money or face difficult situations because of a risk that did not succeed. However, learning from these experiences, even the ones that do not go well, is often just as valuable as the risks that do succeed, because it helps a person understand what to do differently the next time.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Addresses both professional and personal risk-taking with relevant examples, but the reasoning is not developed in as much depth as in the higher-band answers.

Coherence & Cohesion: Organised logically with professional and personal examples in separate paragraphs; cohesive devices ("However", "In conclusion") are accurate but predictable.

Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "risk" and "successful" throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.

Band 6.5

262 words

Both professional and personal examples are addressed clearly, but agreement errors on nearly every key task word noticeably lower the score.

Taking risk in life, both at work and in personal situation, can be difficult, but I believe the advantage usually outweigh the disadvantage.

In professional life, taking a risk can help someone succeed. For example, a person who leave safe job to start business take a big risk, but if it work, they can be very successful. Even if the business does not succeed, they learn useful skill for the future.

In personal life, taking risk can also be good. For example, moving to another country is risky because it is difficult and unfamiliar, but it can also bring new opportunity that a person would not have otherwise.

However, some risk is not worth taking. If someone take a big risk without thinking carefully, such as spending all their money on something they do not understand, this can cause serious problem.

In conclusion, I think taking risk in professional and personal life usually have more advantage than disadvantage, but only if the risk is carefully consider first. Many successful people, in business and in other area of life, often say that their biggest achievement came from moment when they were willing to try something uncertain rather than staying completely safe. Of course, not every risk work out, and some people do lose money or face difficult situation because of a risk that did not succeed. However, learning from this experience, even the one that do not go well, is often just as valuable as the risk that do succeed, because it help a person understand what to do differently the next time.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Addresses both parts of the question, matching the content of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout reduce clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same five-part structure as the higher-band answers.

Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals on key task words ("risk", "skill", "problem") used throughout instead of their plural forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("advantage outweigh", "a person leave", "if it work") appear on nearly every sentence.

Band 4-5 - What to Avoid

37 words

States a general view but never develops either the professional or personal side of the question, and stays well under the required length.

I think risk is good sometimes.

If you try new thing you can success, but maybe you fail too, this is normal.

I like to take risk in my life, this is my opinion about this topic.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Neither professional nor personal risk-taking is given a real example or developed argument, so the two-part question is never genuinely addressed. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.

Coherence & Cohesion: Paragraphs are short, disconnected statements with minimal linking.

Lexical Resource: Vocabulary is basic and repetitive ("good", "like", "try") with little variation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors throughout ("you can success", "I like to take risk").

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