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Cambridge 15 Writing Task 2 Test 1 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)
Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.
The Prompt
Home Ownership vs Renting
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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262 wordsAdds a genuine condition, financial readiness, to its positive verdict rather than judging the situation as unconditionally good.
In many societies, owning a home carries far greater weight than simply having a place to live, and while I understand the reasons behind this attitude, I believe it ultimately creates a more positive than negative situation, provided people are not pushed into ownership before they are financially ready.
Homeownership is prized for several interlocking reasons. It functions as a long-term financial asset that typically appreciates over decades, offering older homeowners far greater financial security in retirement than renters, who continue paying rent indefinitely with nothing to show for it. It also carries strong emotional and cultural weight, symbolising stability, permanence, and often being treated as a prerequisite for starting a family in many communities.
I view this emphasis as broadly positive, mainly because of the long-term security it provides. Homeowners are shielded from the unpredictability of rent increases and can renovate or adapt their homes freely, building genuine roots in a community over time. Countries like Japan, where homeownership is common and mortgage terms are structured to be manageable even on modest incomes, demonstrate that widespread ownership can coexist with a healthy, stable housing market.
That said, this situation only remains positive when people are not pressured into ownership prematurely, taking on unaffordable debt simply to meet social expectations, since this can lead to genuine financial hardship rather than security.
In conclusion, while cultural and financial pressures explain why homeownership is valued so highly, I believe it is, on balance, a positive situation, as long as the decision to buy is made from genuine financial readiness rather than social obligation alone.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Fully addresses both why ownership matters and whether this is positive, with a clear, well-justified position, and the Japan example gives the reasoning genuine specificity.
Coherence & Cohesion: Each paragraph carries a distinct function, and cohesive devices ("that said", "in conclusion") link them naturally throughout.
Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("prerequisite", "prematurely", "appreciates") used with natural collocation.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including relative clauses and non-finite clauses, used with full accuracy.
Band 8
261 wordsA well-balanced answer let down only slightly by a less specific use of its supporting example.
In many countries, owning a home is considered far more important than renting one, and I believe this attitude exists for both financial and cultural reasons, and that overall it creates a more positive than negative situation.
One major reason people value homeownership is financial security. A home is a long-term asset that usually increases in value over time, giving homeowners something valuable to rely on later in life, unlike renters, who pay money every month without building any equity. Homeownership is also seen as a sign of stability and success in many cultures, especially once someone starts a family.
I think this situation is generally positive, mainly because of the security it provides. Homeowners do not have to worry about rent increases or being asked to move out, and they can make changes to their home as they wish. In countries like Japan, where owning a home is common and mortgages are designed to be affordable, this system seems to work well for most people.
However, I think this is only a positive situation when people buy a home because they are financially ready, not because they feel pressured to do so by society, since this can lead to serious financial problems instead of security. This is an important distinction to keep in mind when thinking about housing policy in general.
In conclusion, while there are both financial and cultural reasons behind the importance placed on homeownership, I believe it is generally a positive situation as long as people are not forced into it before they can genuinely afford it.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Fully addresses both parts of the question with a clear, well-supported opinion and a relevant example (Japan), though the reasoning stays slightly more general than the band 9 answer's.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clear five-paragraph structure with accurate cohesive devices throughout.
Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, though "something valuable to rely on" is more general than the higher-band answer's more precise phrasing.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.
Band 7
253 wordsA clear, reasoned answer that would be stronger with a more developed use of its supporting example.
In many countries, people think owning a home is much more important than renting one. I will explain why this might be, and then give my opinion on whether this is a positive or negative situation.
One reason people want to own a home is that it can be a good investment for the future, since the value of a house often increases over time, unlike renting, where the money is simply spent and not returned. Owning a home is also often seen as a sign that someone is stable and successful, especially once they get married or have children.
In my opinion, I think this situation is mostly positive. Homeowners do not need to worry about their rent going up every year, and they have the freedom to change their home however they like. In countries like Japan, owning a home is common and seems to work well for many families. This suggests that when a country's economic and housing systems are well designed, widespread homeownership can genuinely benefit most people rather than creating financial strain. Japan is a good example of this happening in practice.
However, I think it can become a negative situation if people buy a home before they are financially ready, just because they feel pressure from society to do so, since this can cause serious money problems later.
In conclusion, I believe owning a home is generally a positive situation, but only when people make this decision because they are ready, not because they feel forced to.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Addresses both parts of the question with a clear position, but the example given (Japan) is not developed as fully as in the higher-band answers.
Coherence & Cohesion: Organised logically with one clear idea per paragraph; cohesive devices ("However", "In conclusion") are accurate but predictable.
Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "important" and "positive" throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.
Band 6.5
251 wordsThe reasoning is clear and logically organised, but agreement errors on nearly every key task word noticeably lower the score.
In many country, people think owning home is much more important than renting one. I will explain why this might be, and then give my opinion on whether this is positive or negative situation.
One reason people want to own home is that it can be good investment for the future, since value of house often increase over time, unlike renting, where the money is simply spent and not return. Owning home is also often seen as sign that someone is stable and successful, especially once they get married or have children.
In my opinion, I think this situation is mostly positive. Homeowner do not need to worry about their rent going up every year, and they have freedom to change their home however they like. In country like Japan, owning home is common and seem to work well for many family. This suggest that when a country economic and housing system is well design, widespread homeownership can genuinely benefit most people rather than creating financial strain. Japan is good example of this happening in practice. Many other country in the world could learn a lot from this example.
However, I think it can become negative situation if people buy home before they are financially ready, just because they feel pressure from society to do so, since this can cause serious money problem later.
In conclusion, I believe owning home is generally positive situation, but only when people make this decision because they are ready, not because they feel forced to.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Addresses both parts of the question, matching the content of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout reduce clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same one-idea-per-paragraph structure as the higher-band answers.
Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals on key task words ("country", "family", "problem") used throughout instead of their plural forms.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("value of house often increase", "homeowner do not need", "it can become negative situation") appear on nearly every sentence.
Band 4-5 - What to Avoid
51 wordsStates a position but never develops either half of the question, and stays well under the required length.
I think owning home is important because people feel proud, this is common in many country.
I think this is good thing, because home is safe place for family, no need pay rent every month.
But sometime this is hard because house is expensive, this is my opinion about this topic.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: The question of why ownership matters and whether it is positive is barely addressed, each idea gets one short, unsupported sentence with no real explanation. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.
Coherence & Cohesion: Paragraphs are short, disconnected statements with minimal linking beyond "But".
Lexical Resource: Vocabulary is basic and repetitive ("good", "important", "hard") with little variation.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors throughout ("this is common in many country", "no need pay rent").
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