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Cambridge 12 Writing Task 2 Test 1 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)
Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.
The Prompt
Government Spending on the Arts
Some people think that governments should spend money on building new theatres and art galleries. Others believe that this money would be better spent on improving the quality of public services such as transport and healthcare.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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257 wordsUses a real example and then honestly qualifies its limits, rather than treating it as proof of the whole argument.
Whether public money is better spent on cultural institutions or on transport and healthcare is a question that ultimately comes down to what a society values, but I believe that in almost every context, essential public services should take priority over new theatres and galleries.
There is a genuine case for cultural investment. Museums and theatres enrich civic life, attract tourism, and can regenerate struggling neighbourhoods, as seen in Bilbao, where the Guggenheim Museum transformed a declining industrial city into a major cultural destination that now supports thousands of local jobs. Culture is not simply decorative; it can have measurable economic and social returns.
That said, the comparison with transport and healthcare is not close in most circumstances. A functioning hospital or reliable public transport network affects nearly every citizen's daily quality of life and, in the case of healthcare, can be a matter of life and death, whereas a new gallery, however beautiful, mainly benefits those who choose to visit it. Governments operate with finite budgets, and when hospital waiting lists are long or roads are congested and unsafe, spending heavily on a new cultural building is difficult to justify, however much cultural value it might eventually generate. The Bilbao example itself only worked because basic infrastructure was already largely in place; cultural investment complemented rather than replaced essential services.
In conclusion, while the arts deserve genuine government support and can occasionally transform a city's fortunes, I believe transport and healthcare should be funded first, with cultural spending following once basic public services are functioning well.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Fully discusses both views with genuine balance before reaching a clear, well-justified position, and the Bilbao Guggenheim example is used specifically, including its limits, rather than as a generic illustration.
Coherence & Cohesion: Each paragraph carries a distinct function, and cohesive devices ("that said", "in conclusion") link them naturally throughout.
Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("regenerate", "finite budgets", "civic life") used with natural collocation.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including relative clauses and non-finite clauses, used with full accuracy.
Band 8
271 wordsA well-balanced discussion let down only slightly by a less nuanced use of its supporting example.
Some people believe governments should invest in cultural buildings like theatres and galleries, while others think this money is better spent on public services such as transport and healthcare. In this essay, I will discuss both views before giving my opinion.
There are good reasons to support spending on the arts. Theatres and galleries can enrich people's lives, preserve a country's culture and history, and even attract tourists, which can benefit the local economy. A famous example is the Guggenheim Museum in Bilbao, Spain, which helped transform the city into a popular tourist destination and created many local jobs.
However, other people argue that transport and healthcare are far more important, since they affect almost everyone's daily life directly. A country with poor public transport or an underfunded healthcare system faces serious problems that impact citizens far more than the absence of a new art gallery would. When hospital waiting times are already long, spending large sums on a new theatre can seem difficult to justify to the public. This is particularly true in countries where public healthcare systems are already under significant financial strain, since diverting funds toward cultural projects in such circumstances can appear to be a serious misallocation of scarce resources.
In my opinion, while cultural spending can bring real benefits, I believe governments should prioritise transport and healthcare first, since these services are essential for everyone's basic quality of life, and any extra funding for the arts should come after these needs are properly met.
In conclusion, both views have merit, but I believe public services should generally come before cultural spending when government budgets are limited.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Fully discusses both views with a clear, well-supported opinion and a relevant example (the Guggenheim), though the reasoning stays slightly more general than the band 9 answer's qualified use of the same example.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clear five-paragraph structure with accurate cohesive devices throughout.
Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, mostly precise, though "far more important" is a little more general than the more specific comparative language of a higher-band answer.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.
Band 7
266 wordsA clear, well-reasoned answer that would be stronger with one concrete example to anchor its argument.
Some people think governments should spend money on things like theatres and art galleries, while other people think this money should be used to improve services like transport and healthcare instead. I will discuss both views and then give my opinion.
People who support spending on the arts believe that theatres and galleries make life more enjoyable and can help preserve a country's culture for future generations. They also point out that cultural buildings can attract tourists, which brings money into the local economy and can create new jobs for local people.
On the other hand, some people believe that transport and healthcare are much more important, because these services affect the daily lives of almost everyone in the country. If a country has bad roads or long waiting times at hospitals, this causes real problems for ordinary people, and many people would argue that this kind of problem is more serious than not having enough theatres or galleries. For example, if hospital waiting lists grow longer because funding was diverted elsewhere, this can have a direct and serious effect on people's health and wellbeing, which is arguably far more important than whether a town has a new art gallery.
In my opinion, I think transport and healthcare should be the top priority for government spending, because they are essential for people's everyday lives, while spending money on the arts, although nice, is not as urgently needed by most citizens.
In conclusion, both sides have valid points, but I believe governments should focus first on services like transport and healthcare before spending money on cultural projects.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Discusses both views and gives a clear opinion, but no specific real-world example is used to support either side, unlike in the higher-band answers.
Coherence & Cohesion: Organised clearly with one paragraph per view; cohesive devices ("On the other hand", "In conclusion") are accurate but predictable.
Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "important" and "services" throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.
Band 6.5
258 wordsThe discussion is well balanced, but agreement errors on nearly every key task word noticeably lower the score.
Some people think government should spend money on thing like theatre and art gallery, while other people think this money should be use to improve service like transport and healthcare instead. I will discuss both view and then give my opinion.
People who support spending on arts believe that theatre and gallery make life more enjoyable and can help preserve country culture for future generation. They also point out that cultural building can attract tourist, which bring money into local economy and can create new job for local people.
On other hand, some people believe that transport and healthcare is much more important, because this service affect daily life of almost everyone in the country. If a country have bad road or long waiting time at hospital, this cause real problem for ordinary people, and many people would argue that this kind of problem is more serious than not having enough theatre or gallery. For example, if hospital waiting list become longer because funding was use somewhere else, this can have direct and serious effect on people health and wellbeing, which is arguably far more important than whether a town have new art gallery.
In my opinion, I think transport and healthcare should be top priority for government spending, because they are essential for people everyday life, while spending money on arts, although nice, is not as urgently need by most citizen.
In conclusion, both side have valid point, but I believe government should focus first on service like transport and healthcare before spending money on cultural project.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Discusses both views and gives a clear opinion, matching the content of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout reduce clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same one-paragraph-per-view structure as the higher-band answers.
Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals on key task words ("theatre", "gallery", "service") used throughout instead of their plural forms.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("government should spend", "transport and healthcare is", "this service affect", "a country have bad road", "both side have valid point") appear on nearly every sentence.
Band 4-5 - What to Avoid
58 wordsNames both views but never actually discusses either one in any depth.
Some people think government should build theatre and museum. Other people think transport and hospital is more important.
I think hospital is very important because people need it when they sick.
But theatre also good for country, people can relax and enjoy there.
In conclusion I think both thing are important, this is my opinion about this topic.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Both views are named but neither is properly discussed, each gets a single unsupported sentence, so the instruction to "discuss both views" is not really fulfilled. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.
Coherence & Cohesion: Paragraphs list opinions without connecting them into a developing argument.
Lexical Resource: Extremely basic and repetitive vocabulary ("good", "important", "think") with no attempt at more varied language.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors, including missing plurals and subject-verb agreement ("people need it when they sick", "both thing are important").
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